目前已經整部都看完，感覺呈現有些可惜，故事中許多台詞或許是為了符合黑手黨主題刻意寫的，像是（與一般人不同），但是主角目前表現的狠勁不太匹配讀起來很容易出戲。 我很欣賞作者願意嘗試黑手黨題材，但是黑手黨題材的魅力是展現人性以及利益的黑暗面，這部作品卻展現出偏向日常感的感覺，導致像是與其他配角的互動（像是買藥、看病）這些劇情並沒有像是有黑手黨的體系、階級的運作。 感情發展方面也有些動機不足，導致兩位女主的吸引力不夠，很難產生共鳴，這一類題材需要更紮實的邏輯支撐，作者以後下次可以嘗試多找資料以及觀看相關作品。

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文筆好棒 又帶著點冷幽默 又讓人覺得很溫馨 期待更新~

*SPOILERS AHEAD* So, i just want to talk about the novel in comparison to the manga. In the manga there is a bond between Ren and Wanshu. Of course its always based on the Stockholm syndrome that Wanshu has developed, but there are a lot of differences and we can see more of the characters backstories, which are quite similar and that, i think, is the reason that they do have a bond and that's why Ren sees a similarity with Wanshu even in the manga. Here, Ren is quite cold, sarcastic and in the end it is proved that she just plays with Wanshu and does not really care about her, not even in her sickening way. So, I would say that the novel is more realistic in terms of emotions and plot. Ren is an actual murderer that plays with people's fates, Wanshu still suffers from Stockholm syndrome, but after not a lot if thought she goes with the police and betrays Ren. Not to mention that Ren does not use the phrase 'I did everything for you' ,because she is actually doing it for her own sake, because her life is boring. The policeman, is also a human, she 'betrays', if you could say that, Wanshu's trust and seeks to take revenge for old man's death. In the manga, there is not even an old man. Anyways, the differences are many and i understand the dissatisfaction of many for the end in the novel, but i think it is the most realistic and reasonable one, because it doesn't present any sort of distorted romance between Wanshu and Ren, since there are not the appropriate conditions (not backstories that connect like the manga etc). I am curious to see how the manga is going to develop. Overall i enjoyed the novel and I'm happy that they don't end up 'together', maybe because I secretly wanted, but i despised myself for it, since this is abuse, not love. I liked the moral messeges, the plot and the narration. Take care everyone ♥️

作家大大我追了兩年了什麼時候會更新完~

起因是因為在youtube上看了一個，自八王之亂起始至楊堅再次一統 的超長影片，於是便有了這個「這一年，永嘉五年」。 算是很大量的查閱當時的歷史資料。 西晉雖統一了三國，不過三十多年便走向崩解，甚至開啟了華夏近三百年的動盪。 但，其實若你仔細研究過，你會發現，那個時代名將、名臣輩出。 陣容之盛，完全不輸受大眾喜愛的三國時期。 先説説石勒，雖然是個侵略者。 可是若你看過他的發家史，真的不得不佩服他。 總有人說朱元璋起點很低。至少，朱元璋是自由的，也有「驅逐蒙古」這種大義名分。 石勒的起點更低，他是羯人，是胡人。門閥世家看不起寒門，寒門也看不上胡人。 他曾被一個西晉宗室，司馬騰栓著脖子當奴隸賣。看著同胞死亡。 若換做別人大概自暴自棄了！ 雖然說後來遇上「貴人」，但把握機會成長進化還是得靠自己。 石勒曾被當時的名將苟晞（號稱當世韓信）打敗過。卻沒有一厥不振，當苟晞自我膨脹，醉生夢死的時候，石勒卻在「進化」，從一個流寇將領，成長為「統帥」，最後徹底擊潰了苟晞。 雖然目不識丁，卻禮賢讀書人。 張賓，這個人大約可以算是當代諸葛亮也不為過。 石勒奉張賓為「右侯」，終其一生不曾直呼張賓之名。 他創立了「君子營」把大量的士人納為己用，不但出謀劃策，也幫助石勒治理。 石勒，這是一個韌性極強的人。 能以奴隸之身最終成為一統北方的霸主。 非常了不起。 西晉，那是一個英雄與魔王併存的年代！ 能在這種崩壞的時代笑到最後，他配得上被寫進史書。 寫《這一年，永嘉五年》的這段日子，我反覆咀嚼這些人物的抉擇。 石勒不是臉譜化的反派，荀懷也不是聖人。 那個年代每個人都在泥濘裡掙扎，沒有人有標準答案。 我把這份掙扎，寫進了書裡。 沒有系統、沒有金手指、也沒人穿越。 只有永嘉五年春的泥濘、冷雨、和一道道他們親手關上的門。